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Goya


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I'm not much of a poet, but I just extended this off something I wrote in a text message. Fact. I made it a poem to be recited by two people of the opposite gender. Text in italic is of the female speech. Stupid it seems, yes, but I'm an odd person like that. Note how I tend to get a little 'Shakespearian'. That's the course of my English class taking over. I like Shakespeare. But yes, enjoy. Comments appreciated. ;D

I love your touch
Your taste
Your scent
Such a sight

You are but a rose in full bloom
You are the candle in my room
And light the darkest of sky
You are the path in which I lead
You are the dove I set free
And give life to

I am the support beneath your feet
I shall always take heed for your care
And for that you shall protect
I am a jewel glistens in yonder light
I am the one who sees you as my horse ridden knight
And I shall respect your values

I ask upon thee for one kiss
And thou shall place unto one's lips
I express more than a heart to you
And I hold your hand to mine

You are my blessing
And I accept to be it
You are my everything
And you are my life

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This better not be a text to who I think it's too.

Lovely dear. I love the old english. maybe could you start it in there a bit earlier?

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Steph wrote:

This better not be a text to who I think it's too.

Lovely dear. I love the old english. maybe could you start it in there a bit earlier?


No, Steph, it's not who you think it is. It was actually to Emma. I just busted it out on her. Why would I send HIM poetry? He doesn't understand the art of writing. Song maybe but...OH WHATEVER.

Oh yes. Hmm. Next time round perhaps I might.

 



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Well good. I'm just being protective over my percious partner.

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Goya wrote:

 

Steph wrote:

This better not be a text to who I think it's too.

Lovely dear. I love the old english. maybe could you start it in there a bit earlier?


No, Steph, it's not who you think it is. It was actually to Emma. I just busted it out on her. Why would I send HIM poetry? He doesn't understand the art of writing. Song maybe but...OH WHATEVER.

Oh yes. Hmm. Next time round perhaps I might.

 

 



 Crickey! blankstare Doesn't sound good. Beautiful poem tho smile   



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Goya


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bellamyspiano wrote:

 

Goya wrote:

 

Steph wrote:

This better not be a text to who I think it's too.

Lovely dear. I love the old english. maybe could you start it in there a bit earlier?


No, Steph, it's not who you think it is. It was actually to Emma. I just busted it out on her. Why would I send HIM poetry? He doesn't understand the art of writing. Song maybe but...OH WHATEVER.

Oh yes. Hmm. Next time round perhaps I might.

 

 



Crickey! blankstare Doesn't sound good. Beautiful poem tho smile

 


Yes, highly long story. Thank-you. :P

 



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