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VesperDomino007


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I've probably written near to 100 poems, and this one is the only one I am truly truly proud of. I wrote this some time last year, I don't remember when and I just realized I had a place to post it.

Exlplosions

Too good to care
make your plans and keep them
Destroy the thought of freedom
A push, a shove, ignored
Let the flame of fear ignite.



Watch it explode
begin to implode
the whole of itself exhumed
Feel it erode
A soul on its own
In a plan of destruction sold.



Scratch out the truth
rewrite the words
continue to spread
a sense of fear
A fear that controls
the minds of the naive.



Scramble our thoughts
youre too blind to see
the devestation and shame
you have put on our lives.


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Goya


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That's fantastic!

Very lyrical, Matthew inspired perhaps? :P

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MrBS


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Aye, quite good. I'm not terribly much a poetry man myself, but that's still good. Particularly liked the 'watch it explode/begin to implode' bit.

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VesperDomino007


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Thanks very much to both of you! :)

Yes, I suppose it's quite lyrical because it was originally intented to be a song, but never really made it so I still regard it as a poem.

People often ask me if it was Muse inspired, and I guess you could say it was seeing as at the time that I wrote it I was listening to muse non-stop, but it wasn't intentional haha.

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Steph


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Very cryptic.

*cough*bush*cough*

Damn the man! Save the Empire sissa!

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VesperDomino007


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Steph wrote:

Very cryptic.

*cough*bush*cough*

Damn the man! Save the Empire sissa!






Bush? Where on earth did you get that? Perposterous! biggrin.gifgiggle.gif



Im doing my best sissa! *runs down to secret underground bunker office lab thing*

Eddie Izzard is right, we are indeed the next Roman Empire (there's no one else going!) and in time we will also collapse......weirdface.gif



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